I have noticed that from the beginning I had some errors that I would keep making with my work. Overtime however, I have been able to try and fix these certain things. This class has only helped me become a better writer, and as a result of this class, I am able to take the skills I have learned and put them towards my future work. I know that I am not the perfect writer, however I have developed better skills and ideas as a result of engaging with the text and marking my essay for errors. The help of my peer’s positive comments as well as my Professor, has allowed me to strive for success with my essays. Attached below are examples from a rough draft of an essay in which was peer reviewed. The comments that highlighted the whole paragraph were brought to my attention and fixed. The positive feedback in which I received allowed me to strengthen my claims and that improved the overall quality of my essay.